ElderBabaji's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[ESpeLD Kidd.00 12/27/010 #1]

RnB?

I was like DOOM?

Then I was like Meh.

4:00 - OOOOOOOHHHHHH SHHHIIIIITTTT. Head Bop

DJEPITOME responds:

Its Whatever You Hear. If You Hear R N' B, Then Its R N' B To You.
I Just Mesh Sounds I Love Together, Creating New Compostitions That I Dig.

The Track Was Like "Meh" To You Too.
Ha

Thanks,
Stay Up

[ATM.on (SH)GoingInCircles]

Green thumb on the hand/It keeps on thumbin a gran

AIIIGHT, I felt this one, well written, even if some rhymes are forgettable, there are a bunch of heavy ones that left me thinking. Also for me I felt like the chorus could be more melodic with this beat, I really feel the rhyme for it, it's my favorite of the song, but this could be catchy AND deep with singing or some sample.

But overall this is a dope track, rhymes opening up each time I listen and a dope, powerful beat. I'd give it a higher rating if I didn't feel it could be even better.

LyRikLyNkLyNd responds:

Great review. I feel you on the hook. I always just drop a slick 8 on the chorus and let it ride, can't really croon lol. I really appreciate what you said about the writing, I wrote the verses and chorus in about 2 hours. Alot of lines are forgetable when you just breeze through with brief revise. Also sum times I'll just put one easy line to get into another complex one. It all makes me sit back and asses my talent, and also know that I need to put in more time to come up with sumthing that will really catch on. Thanx for the words

[Kami | The peanut gang]

Samples - 10, Drums - 4

Need to switch up that snare, maybe put some quicker high hats in, but it def needs something else. Nice samples though.

Kamikazi1 responds:

Meh i think the drums are dope! If i had to rate the drums i would say 10/10!

woogie boogie
woogie boogie
woogie boogie

[EX!!! - Stardust]

Just Switch Up The Sample

And this is Gold. At around 1:05 I really wanted it to drop into a different tone if only for a couple bars. I feel this would really bring out your main sample and keep it fresh for the rest of the song. Also, try and see what it would sound like with some 16th high hats. Keep it up though, this is talent.

EternalXIII responds:

I think I'll go back and try to fix this one up a bit. I like the idea of having some fast hats in there, it would definitely mix things up a bit and break the monotony of the track.

Thanks for the review!

[-When I'm Gone-]

Nice Beat, Wary of the Rhyme Scheme

First off I can get down to this. But my only critique is that you need to rhyme a little more. At least for me I feel you missed some opportunities for some really nice flow, just one example the word affiliate has so many directions you could go with it. But if this is all a freestyle I can't hate too much. Regardless keep doing your thing, but some more rhymes could open up your appeal ten fold.

aliasf responds:

the beat itself is not that long.