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ElderBabaji

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Nice Beat, Wary of the Rhyme Scheme

First off I can get down to this. But my only critique is that you need to rhyme a little more. At least for me I feel you missed some opportunities for some really nice flow, just one example the word affiliate has so many directions you could go with it. But if this is all a freestyle I can't hate too much. Regardless keep doing your thing, but some more rhymes could open up your appeal ten fold.

aliasf responds:

the beat itself is not that long.

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