ElderBabaji's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[[AN] Dance of the Breakbeat]

OOOOOHHH KKKKKKK

Hectic head bopping.
Maybe some stronger snares? I felt myself wanting a crunchy sound.
Also try have the xylophone going double time, that might sound buttery crazy.
Nice work.

LiNaK37 responds:

Yeah I was actually thinking of doing that with the bell sound but I decided not to.

[Jamben Jam]

Great sample, would have gone in another direction

I also really like that wavy synth that comes in, I'd like to hear more variation with that, and maybe some faster high hats, but it's certainly not a bad song.

boza44 responds:

thank you feel free to critique more of my songs and i will do the same

[Here I Come, Damn Tough]

My Problem with NewGrounds MCs

Is that most of them sound like they couldn't handle themselves in a schyph, but this was dope, the flows weren't trying to do more then they had to, and the rhymes though not amazing complex, kept your head bopping, not a 10 cause you guys can def get better, but an 8 for a dope track.

DJEPITOME responds:

I Think The Beat Is 10, And Anything I Did With It After The Fact Is 8.

Thanks.

[Child Abuser]

Shout outs to all the child abuser abusers

Nice chord progression, maybe some more complex rhymes next time though, but no hate for putting your thoughts on paper. Keep doing your thing.

berdin420 responds:

ya i dont make real music, so it was just messin arround
thanx for the shout out though

[-GM- Deceit]

Crafty

I fucks with every inch of the mysterious beat. Well Done. Stay Warm.

B-RadGfromOV responds:

thanks. I fucks with every inch of your review! stay tuned!

[ESpeLD Kidd.00 12/27/010 #1]

RnB?

I was like DOOM?

Then I was like Meh.

4:00 - OOOOOOOHHHHHH SHHHIIIIITTTT. Head Bop

DJEPITOME responds:

Its Whatever You Hear. If You Hear R N' B, Then Its R N' B To You.
I Just Mesh Sounds I Love Together, Creating New Compostitions That I Dig.

The Track Was Like "Meh" To You Too.
Ha

Thanks,
Stay Up

[ATM.on (SH)GoingInCircles]

Green thumb on the hand/It keeps on thumbin a gran

AIIIGHT, I felt this one, well written, even if some rhymes are forgettable, there are a bunch of heavy ones that left me thinking. Also for me I felt like the chorus could be more melodic with this beat, I really feel the rhyme for it, it's my favorite of the song, but this could be catchy AND deep with singing or some sample.

But overall this is a dope track, rhymes opening up each time I listen and a dope, powerful beat. I'd give it a higher rating if I didn't feel it could be even better.

LyRikLyNkLyNd responds:

Great review. I feel you on the hook. I always just drop a slick 8 on the chorus and let it ride, can't really croon lol. I really appreciate what you said about the writing, I wrote the verses and chorus in about 2 hours. Alot of lines are forgetable when you just breeze through with brief revise. Also sum times I'll just put one easy line to get into another complex one. It all makes me sit back and asses my talent, and also know that I need to put in more time to come up with sumthing that will really catch on. Thanx for the words

[Kami | The peanut gang]

Samples - 10, Drums - 4

Need to switch up that snare, maybe put some quicker high hats in, but it def needs something else. Nice samples though.

Kamikazi1 responds:

Meh i think the drums are dope! If i had to rate the drums i would say 10/10!

woogie boogie
woogie boogie
woogie boogie

[Life of the Mundane]

Took A Few Listens

To catch the flow, I'd consider re recording that ninja line, cause after that the flow is butter. When Newgrounds lets me post my tracks, you should peep em, maybe get down on a track. But this is nice, keep it up.

[EX!!! - Stardust]

Just Switch Up The Sample

And this is Gold. At around 1:05 I really wanted it to drop into a different tone if only for a couple bars. I feel this would really bring out your main sample and keep it fresh for the rest of the song. Also, try and see what it would sound like with some 16th high hats. Keep it up though, this is talent.

EternalXIII responds:

I think I'll go back and try to fix this one up a bit. I like the idea of having some fast hats in there, it would definitely mix things up a bit and break the monotony of the track.

Thanks for the review!